Recommended by Ana Heifer
Ana Heifer
Wow, what can I say about this story? I read the first chapter 3 days ago, I've already caught up and in just 13 chapters I can say that it's among the 10 best fanfics I've ever read! Man, in every chapter, the way Pan is portrayed is perfect. The lines, the quirks, expressions, THE EYEBROW. Good heavens, it's wonderful. Every detail, every little detail, is perfect.
It's a very well written fanfic, everything. There's no "language flaw" (not that I've noticed, and I'm quite annoying about that), and despite a Portuguese error or other, it's not painful to read, like many fics out there are - and any beta -reader would fix this without much effort, there are very few mistakes.
It seems like the author knows exactly where to end each chapter to make you want to read the next one. As soon as I saw that I didn't have any more to read, I couldn't help myself and had to recommend it.
Other than that I would recommend this fanfic to anyone until I die, I have nothing else to say. What I say is: read. You can't regret reading this.
Congratulations to the author szsz
kiss
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"THERE", "THEIR", and "THEY'RE"
"There" refers to a place. "Their" indicates possession. "They're" is a contraction for "they are." Ex.: There is a beautiful garden. Their house is nearby. They're going for a walk.
"EFFECT" and "AFFECT"
"Effect" is a noun meaning result. "Affect" is a verb meaning to influence. Ex.: The new policy had a significant effect. The weather can affect our mood.
Recommended by Pudim de Menta
Pudim de Menta
You're browsing Nyah, in a category where you don't even read fics, and you come across this wonder.
Generally, fics involving Disney characters are clichés, or too sugar-coated for my taste.
Characters constructed very well, writing well done and crafted
it is a perfect read.