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Uzumaki Lucas
Man, your story is really cool, it has a well-crafted plot and story, I just hope it improves the grammar errors, and the "hurries" in the story.
The story is too rushed, try to lengthen one more chapter and another.
That's it!
So Long and Dattebayo!
"YOUR" and "YOU'RE"
"Your" indicates possession. "You're" is a contraction for "you are." Ex.: Is this your umbrella? You're a wonderful person.
"WEATHER" and "WHETHER"
"Weather" refers to the atmospheric conditions. "Whether" is used to introduce alternatives or choices. Ex.: The weather is perfect for a picnic. I'm not sure whether to wear a jacket or not.
Recommended by Uzumaki Lucas
Uzumaki Lucas
Man, your story is really cool, it has a well-crafted plot and story, I just hope it improves the grammar errors, and the "hurries" in the story.
The story is too rushed, try to lengthen one more chapter and another.
That's it!
So Long and Dattebayo!
11Eyes
Recommended by Uzumaki Lucas
Uzumaki Lucas
Man, your story is really cool, it has a well-crafted plot and story, I just hope it improves the grammar errors, and the "hurries" in the story.
The story is too rushed, try to lengthen one more chapter and another.
That's it!
So Long and Dattebayo!
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"YOUR" and "YOU'RE"
"Your" indicates possession. "You're" is a contraction for "you are." Ex.: Is this your umbrella? You're a wonderful person.