Recommended by Luaraujo
Luaraujo
I recommend it without restrictions. I congratulate the writer for the perfection in detailing the locations, environments and characters. The action scenes and the characters' feelings are very well described and elaborated. Reading becomes light and dynamic. Transports the reader to an almost visible world.
The content, in my opinion, was original, creative, has good vocabulary fluency, sequence of facts, actions and subjects and integration between the characters.
One event is always linked to another. All in all, a pleasant read.
"ITS" and "IT'S"
"Its" shows possession. "It's" is a contraction for "it is" or "it has." Ex.: The dog wagged its tail. It's a lovely day outside.
"LED" and "LEAD"
"Led" is the past tense of the verb "to lead." "Lead" can be a verb meaning to guide or a noun referring to a type of metal. Ex.: She led the team to victory. He will lead the project. The pipes are made of lead.
Recommended by Grega
Grega
This fic is fantastic, as always the author manages to keep the reader hooked from start to finish. It's a thought-provoking read. Emotion, action, adventure, suspense, mystery, in short, everything a good read should have. If you have read and liked the trilogy "Finding the Way", "Operation Green Dragon" and "The Conspiracy". You're going to love this one. I recommend it without any fear. I've already become an Alba fan.