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O que mais gostei: Essa foi sem dúvida a fic desse tema mais bem escrita que encontrei até agora. Gostei bastante, por favor continue. Vc tbm tem a intenção de focar nos outros personagens? Ou vai ser só esse núcleo May, Tony, Pepper e Peter?

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SE EU CHOREI POR CAUSA DA MORTE DO PETER?

MULHER, EU TRANSFORMEI O CINEMA EM UM OCEANO.

FOI UM BAQUE E TANTO.

A morte do Loki doeu meu coração. Mas a do Peter, doeu minha alma.

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Ansiosa para o próximo capítulo. Beijos

Já estou super envolvida com essa história, então é bom você continuar viu?

A todo caso, uma diquinha básica, dê uma revisada na pontuação, tem vírgulas demais por aí.

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amei

ela vai contar a ele

tony sera papai

Eitaaaaaa! Um baby Stark está vindo por aí! Que péssima hora para Tony aparecer no recinto, hein? :v

Acho que a tia May ficará bem triste ao saber do Peter :( tadinha!

Otimo capitulo, nos vemos no próximo!

Tony sempre chega na hora que não deveria, e sempre fica fora na hora que deveria estar presente. Droga, Tony!

Gostei da conversa entre Pepper e May, é algo que eu gostaria de ver algum dia. Mas Pepper falando de gravidez me lembra o Capitão perguntando lá em Guerra Civil se eles estavam grávidos e a reação do Tony kkk

Capítulo supimpa! Até o próximo o/