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Prólogo
First day at new home
Dinner with a friend
Who is he? Why do it?
Mother, clothes and maybe a friend
Pet, little sister, play
Emergency? What a day!
First day of school
Beautiful girl who kiss the game begin!
What is the most gorgeous, fight fight fight
Redhead or blonde , boredom and first sleepover
Snow, today's feast and kiss what will be giving it to look like this ?
Sorry, party, party, party and party and who do you choose?
Hira, the accident remain with me please do not go away
Bee infestation in school, a cousin kangaroo and a new friend
Kiss, migraine, kiss can tell you a secret?
Where did you go, let the ice cream shop? Why is he here and my first night was saved thanks to mysterious girl
Not spoke of his not talk about my, doubts and a week without class
Fighting? Rather school mystery
You have the same powers to my a puzzle and monsters
Maze these voices are leaving us crazy.
Alexia , where you will stay for you away from me Elsa?
In search of my sister part 1
In search of my sister part 2
In search of my sister part final
Capitulo 26
We have to help there, who they are cousins??
Yes she is my cousin, want help? Will it one day this nightmare will end
Help
My hero and my héroes
invitings people to small party, the first kiss Vaniro
Accident is all my fault
Without memories? Brothers? Toothless
Flies ? Agreed !! massage!! Movie!!
He did not remember me , recalling the past, Hiccup ?
Just cry to vent, old song
Mom? Alone.
I love you
I feel a strange thing , meeting short and who I choose?
I choose Jack, drinking is the solution
Life all about to change
Bringing together people
More people to join the battle
Soon the battle
Anyway Battle
Epilogo
Quero ver drama entre irmao... kkkkkkkk ai vc pensa essa menina e doente, sou kkkkkkkkk to amanda, vc escreve mt bem, estou maravilhada
Kkkk entre irmãos sempre haverá discussão ate o cap 4
Continuo sim beijinhos
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O nome *-*
O que acho que pode melhorar:
A Escrita. Aqui vai algumas dicas: 1-Inicio de frase de um diálogo, use letra Maiuscula. 2-Tente colocar mais virgulas e pontos de exclamação, ponto final e etc.
Sobre letra Maiúscula eu não sabia, minha professora que me ajudou e tento arrumar isso quando posto e pontuação é algo que coloco, mas muitas vezes esqueço. Obrigada por comentar.